Before and After
Not all of my work survives the test of time. The image here is a revision of a piece I made in November. A few months ago, I was working on making "more interesting" backgrounds, but the original background just looked chaotic and confusing. Of course the piece didn't sell, so I brought it home and re-made the background. I think this one works better because there is both interest and harmony. The music adds texture without being overwhelming.
The purple bird piece also received a make-over. The original background was very dark. While the contrast made the bird stand out, the overall feel was disconcertingly dark. I think this revision allows for the bird to remain the focal point, but the background is now more engaging.
Since I really enjoy the process of making art, revisions aren't usually distressing to me. I almost always like the second version better, and I get positive feedback from others regarding the changes. I liken this to the writing process I teach my students. The first, second and sometimes even the third draft still needs improvement. I know that artists through the ages over painted their work that didn't stand the test of time; why should I be any different?

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